Heavy Weather

 

We are some coffee drinking sonsabitches

and the nurses keep it coming. 

                                

We like it better strong and bitter

like hemlock

and life. 

 

We stay long past the allowable hour

while the halls quiet and the coffee comes.

We wait for her to waken. 

 

When she does and I bend close

her fingers reach my face

imprecisely

unfold

against my cheek

and rest.

 

She frowns at the feeling

on the tips of them and says

how it must be raining

and I say

Yeah Mom

it’s coming down in sheets.

2 Responses to “Heavy Weather”

  1. bitter like hemlock and life-
    and her surprise at your tears, that they couldn’t be,
    but something else- rain-
    speaks volumes of her strength
    and her idea of yours.

    Very intimate, clancyjane.
    Thank you for sharing.

    welcome. 10Q. for reading. for writing. for all.

  2. I think this is a tender and wonderful poem. I like everything about it: the contrasts, settings, movement, language, ending. I think using the word “imprecisely” was so perfect and descriptive.

    Glad to see you are in operation. I have not been blogging or rolling much lately and missed your return.

    you honor me with your kind words–wonderful to hear, especially from someone whose work and opinion i value. thanks very much.

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